That fight scene. So great and well written and you tapped into each country's certain enjoyments of war. Finland, oh Finland. And you brought in Greenland ♥ And Sweden, left out of the viking fun, you'll be there next time.
I love how you write the little interactions and (sort of) relationship between Canada and Russia. It works well~ And fighting with knives? That suits Canada well, they're subtle but powerful.
The story so far is working really well. Aw, Ludwig, he must feel horrible about all this. And Riis, so awesome thus far.
Oh and are Ireland and Scotland going to be making appearances?
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Date: 2009-08-12 08:32 pm (UTC)I love how you write the little interactions and (sort of) relationship between Canada and Russia. It works well~ And fighting with knives? That suits Canada well, they're subtle but powerful.
The story so far is working really well. Aw, Ludwig, he must feel horrible about all this. And Riis, so awesome thus far.
Oh and are Ireland and Scotland going to be making appearances?